Evaluation Julia

The speech was structured, but I also think there would be more bridges between some ideas. I love thinking out of the box and adding something new, indeed, I understand that the shell of our speeches is our book, but it’s necessary to add more information, I would say to customise the speech. And I want to say thank you for giving some newspaper article, giving examples (even in few words) about our group listening skills.
I gave 11 points for speech delivery, the volume and intonation could be better ( and I know they can be perfect!), the same is with articulation. Unfortunately, I had no chance to see the speaker, that’s why I couldn’t give any points.
The timing is fine, but I always want this time to be used more effectively ( more vividness, examples, personal experience. I’m not sure the speech was extremely creative, the presentation was pleasant enough, but nothing outstanding, I’d say:)